Flash Fiction

Harvest Season | Mike Ciervo

Three girls cross though the middle of the Harvest parade, cutting like scissors snipping a ribbon. They are slightly chunky, more than they should be at fourteen or fifteen, tied flannels exposing young soft stomachs over the top of black leggings, begging to be touched. They smell like they are old enough to drink but I can still see the dust from the linoleum floor of some high school slapped all over their sneakers and boots. A little girl’s mother standing next to me gives them a dirty look, vowing she will never let her daughter be one of those girls despite the fact she was one herself. I bet she remembers vodka and cigarettes and meeting boys in cowboy hats and dirty jeans under the auxiliary stage bleachers. I remember those things.

I watch the threesome vanish amidst the smell of popcorn, glowing Ferris wheel lights, and the steady snap of a marching band snare drum pulling at my teeth like I’ve tasted something too sweet. I wonder how many other girls have wandered into autumn carnival crowds on cold New England nights and walked out never the same, scared by some other illusion than what the fun house had to offer. Spun around and flipped upside down, a ride they weren’t ready for, dizzy and sick, solid ground replaced with the unfamiliar sensation of outer space.  

My eyes follow them until they are just blurs. Other girls float like witches—casting spells with their eyes—hexing me without a word. I wish I had the mouth of a sixteen-year-old with a tongue that would impress, not the dry tired one I speak with now. It would have them drawing hearts in spiral notebooks with my initials in the center, line after line of my name written in cursive, just like they did many carnivals ago, just like they don’t anymore.

 

 

 

 

 

Mike Ciervo, senior English major at Central Connecticut State University

Blue Muse Magazine is a general interest literary magazine published by the students of the English Department at Central Connecticut State University in New Britain, Connecticut. We publish poetry, fiction, and a gamut of creative nonfiction on anything and everything the blue muse inspires us to write.

13 comments on “Harvest Season | Mike Ciervo

  1. I admire the writer’s concrete significant details throughout the story; we get to see and feel the scenes and characters of the three teenagers. I like the writer’s sense of humor and judgement when he assumes the mother of the little girl was “one herself” similar to those teenage girls. Throughout the mid section of the second paragraph I sense that the story takes a turn away from flow of the story, but then returns as the narrator continues to think about and watch those girls and others.

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  2. Mike, I am NOT a fan of short fiction (at least, I’m not a fan of WRITING short fiction!) but this is amazing. I miss reading your work! Great to see it on my syllabus this semester!

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  3. Mary Collins

    Love the opener of this story, Mike.

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  4. Meghan Corr

    MIKE THIS IS AMAZING. Best short story i’ve ever read. It’s the perfect mix of dramatic ideas/ memories, subtle humor, and imagery

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  5. Lynn Patarini

    Love the illusion!

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  6. Alison Vitolo

    Mmmm, underage chubby girls, amirite?

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  7. Great stuff, Mike. Congratulations.

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  8. You write as if you were searching for a sip from the fountain of youth. Everyone feels that way sooner or later. Nicely written kid.

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  9. WOW ! Quite a writer ! Beautiful

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  10. Beautifully written!

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  11. Jacquelyn Parker

    Amazing….. Paints beautiful visuals and memories of lost Autumn’s

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  12. Bill Chase

    Super pedophiley.

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  13. Powerful stuff-delivers a real sense of longing and loss.

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